A poem
Desperately Seeking Completion
by:
P-
Desperately Seeking Completion
He bends a woman's will
Desperately Seeking Completion
He talks five hundred dollars off a TV
Desperately Seeking Completion
He fights took and nail for a promotion
Desperately Seeking Completion
He sells his conscience for a Sale
Desperately Seeking Completion
He pleads with God for "no cancer"
Desperately Seeking Completion
They lay him into the ground
He was Desperately Seeking Completion,
and found it
by:
P-
Desperately Seeking Completion
He bends a woman's will
Desperately Seeking Completion
He talks five hundred dollars off a TV
Desperately Seeking Completion
He fights took and nail for a promotion
Desperately Seeking Completion
He sells his conscience for a Sale
Desperately Seeking Completion
He pleads with God for "no cancer"
Desperately Seeking Completion
They lay him into the ground
He was Desperately Seeking Completion,
and found it
posted by Seeking Completion at 1:52 AM
8 Comments:
Hey Patty. Cool poem.
also, this blog could use a picture or two.
Need more blog.
When I saw your comment on my blog, and then followed the link to your blog, I was scared. I thought, "Oh no, some crazy poet has found me and will soon be stalking me." Then I find out it's you. You kids today, getting drunk by yourself and then writing on the internet. All in all, it's good. Everything ties together, the black background, the agnst. Love it, love you, thinking about being you for Halloween.
Hey, Patty. Seriously. More blog dude. We need some. It doesn't take but five minutes. I know you can find an extra five minutes in your week to post a lil something something. Help me out.
Oh yeah, and my jaw still hurts, so you ought to do it because you nearly killed me.
Write something about your day. Not poems I don't understand. I don't get poetry!
He fights took and nail for a promotion
Typo?
Should that be "tooth and nail"
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